In reply to one of your replies, sorry about your grandpa. My regards.
In reply to your story, good job! I hope you didn't write this piece to dwell forever in forums all alone! If you did, I would have to berate you, because that would make it a pointless tale. It would sound like you are only writing to list the main things Redwall characters have at their wonderful feasts; like some sort of list, but in a more decorative manner. You probably said you were planning to write a sequel in one of your many replies to posts (forgive me for not reading all of them) however, so if that is so, disregard my last remark.
You are exceptional at grammer for being only eleven! I read lots of stories, and most of them are riddled with countless grammatical errors and such, but I could hardly find any in yours! Don't get me wrong, they're there, just not blatantly obvious, like some people's...
From your writing style and accurate descriptions, I would say you're a great Redwall fan. So am I. I love the stuff. Of course you've heard it before, but your writing style is similar to Brian Jacques. That's not a bad thing, though! Not to brag or anything, but I've been told my writing is similar to J.R.R Tolkien, which is awesome, because I love fantasy.
Holy flying cows look at that. I've accidentally given you a big review (by my standards, anyway)! Sorry about that. Bye, and keep up the good work!
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